Slayer Flicker Strike Walkthrough

I made a Slayer 1-95 full guide with color coordination for the 3.20 league based on 10 frenzy flicker strike (https://www.youtube.com/@TenFrenzyFlicker) and his community post, let me know your thoughts and anywhere I could improve

Its the first build I've posted that I've tried to work on/make so if its shit I'm sorry lmao

https://pastebin.com/yt76dRQy

also I know the gear could be upgraded but for starting-ish gear this isn't to bad at least I feel for something close to a starter build for flicker striking and something that gives more of a idea of what a early game looks and feels like

i like ur pob, real nice